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Post by SuperKamiGuy1 on Jun 15, 2021 2:08:50 GMT
"Damn, here comes the cargo." Ricky said in a hollowed tone. D glanced at him, that jovial expression just turned empty in an instant. Something inside her tells Ricky won't be doing that much sleeping after tonight. Or at all. She takes a deep breath while she contemplates, she's not the most sentimental type and Ric would be the first to testify. But she has known him enough to know he's not a monster. "Why don't you call it a night? Besides we were instructed to be here when the cargo arrives right?" She motions to the ship that has just ported. "Technically speaking, you've done your job. I'll take it from here" Ricky thought about it for a second then pats D on the shoulder, "I'll owe you one" (You only have one opportunity. Make it count) D thought to herself as she watched Ricky leave. Unknown to him, this may be the last time the two shall ever meet. Now that's ominous! Eager to find out what this cargo is! And a nice heartwarming between D and Ricky. It's nice to see that they care about each other beyond a professional relationship. Looking forward to more of them!
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Post by Valhalla Erikson on Jun 28, 2021 20:30:47 GMT
D(Wolf-Crest City: Rax District)
D puts her shades on as the ship makes contact with the port and the ramp is lowered down. She can make out several individuals getting ready to transport the cargo and she takes a sip of her coffee while waiting for them to come on down. Her shades can make out ultraviolet rays covering over the whole docking area. It's a special kind of cloaking device that the shipmates used to make the kind of cargo that they're getting ready to trot out look no more than your usual mundane products. Based on the specifics she's told she know better.
Based on personal experience she knew better.
She sees no more than five MLS(Mecha Loader Systems) coming down with the cargo that appear to be cryogenetic crates. She makes like she's straightening her shades but in actuality she's getting a life monitor reading. That sinking feeling that Rick was feeling was on point as what the employers are handling aren't something like weapons or even drugs but something far more worse than that.
D remains utterly emotionless however, no matter the situation you always remain a professional approach.
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Post by SuperKamiGuy1 on Jun 28, 2021 22:57:24 GMT
D(Wolf-Crest City: Rax District)
D puts her shades on as the ship makes contact with the port and the ramp is lowered down. She can make out several individuals getting ready to transport the cargo and she takes a sip of her coffee while waiting for them to come on down. Her shades can make out ultraviolet rays covering over the whole docking area. It's a special kind of cloaking device that the shipmates used to make the kind of cargo that they're getting ready to trot out look no more than your usual mundane products. Based on the specifics she's told she know better. Based on personal experience she knew better. She sees no more than five MLS(Mecha Loader Systems) coming down with the cargo that appear to be cryogenetic crates. She makes like she's straightening her shades but in actuality she's getting a life monitor reading. That sinking feeling that Rick was feeling was on point as what the employers are handling aren't something like weapons or even drugs but something far more worse than that. D remains utterly emotionless however, no matter the situation you always remain a professional approach. I like D. This is getting really interesting too. Cloaking devices, mechs, sleeping beauty, spy work, this is all really cool set up. I can't wait to see where this goes.
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Post by Valhalla Erikson on Jul 2, 2021 23:26:20 GMT
They're led by a big hulking looking individual, from the looks of things he appears to be wearing the standard field operative gear that covert operatives would wear. His cybernetic eyes glowed as he scans the parameter, "I was informed there would be two of you"
"Something important came up so he had to bail" D explained
The big guy shrugs, "Eh, that just doubles your pay then." His eyes could see the trucks approaching the port about a few miles from where him and D are. "So you have no problems with what has transpired."
D scoffed at that remark. "So Mr-"
"Xerces would do"
"Right. Look as someone who did their time in the military I've seen enough shit that would make what's going on here seem like nothing. I take it you're Alpha Six right"
Xerces smirked at the comment, "Good eye, yourself?"
"Retired Lion Guard operative"
"Would've figured from the accent I hear you guys are some pretty cold fish" Xerces surveyed D's frame; around 5'7, petite with an athletic yet flexible build. Xerces would easily peg her as a gymnast, given the physique. Her almond skin provides a rather exotic beauty he'd find appealing. "Up for a drink when all of this is done?"
"You buying?"
"I'm buying."
"Consider it a date"
(Looking forward to mounting this one) Xerces smiled at the thought while him and D waits for the trucks to arrive.
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Post by SuperKamiGuy1 on Jul 2, 2021 23:55:09 GMT
They're led by a big hulking looking individual, from the looks of things he appears to be wearing the standard field operative gear that covert operatives would wear. His cybernetic eyes glowed as he scans the parameter, "I was informed there would be two of you"
"Something important came up so he had to bail" D explained
The big guy shrugs, "Eh, that just doubles your pay then." His eyes could see the trucks approaching the port about a few miles from where him and D are. "So you have no problems with what has transpired."
D scoffed at that remark. "So Mr-"
"Xerces would do"
"Right. Look as someone who did their time in the military I've seen enough shit that would make what's going on here seem like nothing. I take it you're Alpha Six right"
Xerces smirked at the comment, "Good eye, yourself?"
"Retired Lion Guard operative"
"Would've figured from the accent I hear you guys are some pretty cold fish" Xerces surveyed D's frame; around 5'7, petite with an athletic yet flexible build. Xerces would easily peg her as a gymnast, given the physique. Her almond skin provides a rather exotic beauty he'd find appealing. "Up for a drink when all of this is done?"
"You buying?"
"I'm buying."
"Consider it a date"
(Looking forward to mounting this one) Xerces smiled at the thought while him and D waits for the trucks to arrive. ExNay on that! Lady D is playing these guys like fiddles and it is glorious to watch. This is definitely The Black Widow we should've gotten in the MCU. A master spy who can blend into any situation and bend everyone to her will with just her wits alone. This lady is pure awesome!
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Post by Valhalla Erikson on Jul 3, 2021 0:03:35 GMT
And unlike Faux Black Widow this one isn't above using her looks to get the kind of intel that she needs
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Post by Valhalla Erikson on Jul 3, 2021 1:21:36 GMT
"Sure taking their sweet time to get out aren't they?" One of Xerces men commented that caused Xerces to take pause. He surveyed the drivers and noticed one key component, there aren't anyone driving the trucks. A slight sonic screech increased to the point that the crew within the docks clutched their ears. And before they'd know it a flock of Bats are flying in their direction. The crew piloting the mini-mechas aimed their weapons at the bats but soon discovered their weapons aren't operational. "What the hell?" "Oh I don't see how much of a problem that would be. A few electrical disrupters here or there and making a mecha non-functional shouldn't be a problem" D said in a matter of fact tone. "You fucking bi-" Xerces turned to find nobody standing next to him. Then one by one his men started to vanish then drop down from the sky. Xerces aimed his weapon up, ignoring the screams from his men. A whistling sound came and he noticed someone crouching on a street lamp dressed in a bat themed armor. "About that Date? I'm afraid I'm going to have to take a raincheck" D, the armored clad heroine commented, Xerces just took a shot in response but the heroine vanished. In a sequence of blitz filled brilliance the men were being slaughtered as D sliced them with her claws. The traffickers never stood a chance. It was one big Murder Ballet that the traffickers will only experience once. Xerces open fired but each shot he took he either misses or accidently kills his own men. At this point he could care less about his men, he just wanted to end the creature's life. "I'LL KILL YOU! I'LL FUCKING KILL YOU!" Xerces swore. "This is nuts! This is fucking nuts!. OK, if I stay in here then maybe that thing wouldn't kill me" One of the men piloting the mini-mech gulped and relaxed inside the cockpit. That relied ended up being a short one as D punched through the mecha and the guy sits there dying with a gaping hole through his chest. D crawls out of the mecha and stands on top of it with her hands on her hips. "What's the matter big guy? I thought you're supposed to be some badass operative" Xerces growled and open fired. "So what is it? You got cut because you couldn't pull your own weight" D whispered in his ear mockingly Xerces spin and just open fired everywhere. Xerces pants, no matter how hard he'd try to search the area his scanners couldn't pick up anything. As of now the only signs of life just so happens to be whatever's in the cargo. "Tell you what?" Turned sharply to find D facing him. She grabs his gun and points it at the temple of her head. "I'll give you a free one. You pass then the merchandise goes with you. If you don't" *click* Just then D grabs him by the throat and literally rips his throat out, "Oh hohoho! Trying to get at me while I'm monologuing." Xerces gurgled, D watched him fall to his knees. "The biggest mistake you've made is not making every part of you cybernetic. Wouldn't help you anyways but at least you'd probably provide a fighting chance."
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Post by SuperKamiGuy1 on Jul 3, 2021 1:49:06 GMT
"Sure taking their sweet time to get out aren't they?" One of Xerces men commented that caused Xerces to take pause. He surveyed the drivers and noticed one key component, there isn't anyone driving the trucks. A slight sonic screech increased to the point that the crew within the docks clutched their ears. And before they'd know it a flock of Bats are flying in their direction. The crew piloting the mini-mechas aimed their weapons at the bats but soon discovered their weapons aren't operational. "What the hell?" "Oh I don't see how much of a problem that would be. A few electrical disrupters here or there and making a mecha non-functional shouldn't be a problem" D said in a matter of fact tone. "You fucking bi-" Xerces turned to find nobody standing next to him. Then one by one his men started to vanish then drop down from the sky. Xerces aimed his weapon up, ignoring the screams from his men. A whistling sound came and he noticed someone crouching on a street lamp dressed in a bat themed armor. "About that Date? I'm afraid I'm going to have to take a raincheck" D, the armored clad heroine commented, Xerces just took a shot in response but the heroine vanished. In a sequence of blitz filled brilliance the men were being slaughtered as D sliced them with her claws. The traffickers never stood a chance. It was one big Murder Ballet that the traffickers will only experience once. Xerces open fired but each shot he took he either misses or accidently kills his own men. At this point he could care less about his men, he just wanted to end the creature's life. "I'LL KILL YOU! I'LL FUCKING KILL YOU!" Xerces swore. "This is nuts! This is fucking nuts!. OK, if I stay in here then maybe that thing wouldn't kill me" One of the men piloting the mini-mech gulped and relaxed inside the cockpit. That relief ended up being a short one as D punched through the mecha and the guy sits there dying with a gaping hole through his chest. D crawls out of the mecha and stands on top of it with her hands on her hips. "What's the matter big guy? I thought you're supposed to be some badass operative" Xerces growled and opened fire. "So what is it? You got cut because you couldn't pull your own weight" D whispered in his ear mockingly Xerces spin and just opened fire everywhere. Xerces pants, no matter how hard he'd try to search the area his scanners couldn't pick up anything. As of now the only signs of life just so happens to be whatever's in the cargo. "Tell you what?" Turned sharply to find D facing him. She grabs his gun and points it at the temple of her head. "I'll give you a free one. You pass then the merchandise goes with you. If you don't" *click* Just then D grabs him by the throat and literally rips his throat out, "Oh hohoho! Trying to get at me while I'm monologuing." Xerces gurgled, D watched him fall to his knees. "The biggest mistake you've made is not making every part of you cybernetic. Wouldn't help you anyways but at least you'd probably provide a fighting chance." Annnnd wrecked! Beautiful, Lady D, just beautiful! That's what we like to see, Professonalism at work! Love it!
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Post by Valhalla Erikson on Jul 3, 2021 2:14:37 GMT
D waved her hands and the Bats vanished. She glanced up at the night's sky, despite the overall chaos that occurred she marvels at just how beautiful it looks. She walked towards the cargo and placed her hand on the metallic box that contained the person being trafficked. "I understand just how cruel the world can be at times. But there are also moments when it can be beautiful." Crimson mist surrounds her and she stands without her armor. She pressed the piece on her ear, "It's done" "Good" Her eyes widened when she heard that voice, relaxed she chuckled, "You sure you're not a ninja?" She turned to face the gentleman before him He's a tall fellow dressed in a tailor made suit. There was an aura that gave a commanding presence about him but the kind that D just so happened to respect. The Gentleman looked around the area, "A job well done D, I'll have the Cleaners take care of the mess" "What about her?" D motioned to the coffin behind her. "Once she's thawed she'll have the best care provided for" "I expect nothing less from Paladin. Speaking of expectations-" "You're services will be wired into your account" The Gentleman assured then joked. "Don't spend it all in one place. Aren't you going to see the young lady off?" D shook her head, "I know where you're taking her. I'll check in on her when I have time. If you'll excuse me, I have a date"
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Post by SuperKamiGuy1 on Jul 3, 2021 2:30:17 GMT
D waved her hands and the Bats vanished. She glanced up at the night's sky, despite the overall chaos that occurred she marvels at just how beautiful it looks. She walked towards the cargo and placed her hand on the metallic box that contained the person being trafficked. "I understand just how cruel the world can be at times. But there are also moments when it can be beautiful." Crimson mist surrounds her and she stands without her armor. She pressed the piece on her ear, "It's done" "Good" Her eyes widened when she heard that voice, relaxed she chuckled, "You sure you're not a ninja?" She turned to face the gentleman before him He's a tall fellow dressed in a tailor made suit. There was an aura that gave a commanding presence about him but the kind that D just so happened to respect. The Gentleman looked around the area, "A job well done D, I'll have the Cleaners take care of the mess" "What about her?" D motioned to the coffin behind her. "Once she's thawed she'll have the best care provided for her." "I expect nothing less from Paladin. Speaking of expectations-" "Payment for your services will be wired into your account" The Gentleman assured then joked. "Don't spend it all in one place. Aren't you going to see the young lady off?" D shook her head, "I know where you're taking her. I'll check in on her when I have time. If you'll excuse me, I have a date" And this just keeps getting better! D makes the save and the mystery man is taking her to receive proper care and treatment! This situation turned out really well! Bloody, sure, but honestly she definitely got the job done and saved the day like an absolute boss! Looking forward to her continued adventure and her hot date!
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Post by Valhalla Erikson on Jul 3, 2021 3:12:42 GMT
Cue Post Credits:Rick is enjoying the mid portion of the Football game till his Smart Home alerted his card phone of a guest that had just arrived at his place. Rick puts the card in his pocket and he got up and walked over to the door. "What's the magic word?" "Cannabis's & Beer" Rick pulled out his phone and used his thumb ID to slide the door open and out stands D with two of his favorite things in each hand. "Two of my favorite words in the English language" Rick grinned and D smiled in return as she's invited inside. "Did I miss anything important?" D asked "On the contrary, things are starting to get interesting" Note: For the curious, Rick.
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Post by SuperKamiGuy1 on Jul 3, 2021 3:55:17 GMT
Cue Post Credits:Rick is enjoying the mid portion of the Football game till his Smart Home alerted his card phone of a guest that had just arrived at his place. Rick puts the card in his pocket and he got up and walked over to the door. "What's the magic word?" "Cannabis's & Beer" Rick pulled out his phone and used his thumb ID to slide the door open and out stands D with two of his favorite things in each hand. "Two of my favorite words in the English language" Rick grinned and D smiled in return as she's invited inside. "Did I miss anything important?" D asked "On the contrary, things are starting to get interesting" Note: For the curious, Rick. Pretty fun for a side story prologue chapter! It's got a lot of mystery and intrigue and setup for continuous future storylines as well as introducing a kickass anti-heroine and her cast of cool cats! This is going to be a fantastic ride!
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Post by Valhalla Erikson on Jul 3, 2021 3:57:46 GMT
How do you like the Rick character?
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Post by SuperKamiGuy1 on Jul 3, 2021 3:59:35 GMT
How do you like the Rick character? Oh he's great. Dude knows how to party! NOTE: We do not condone the use of drugs in partying. We do however find it hilarious in fictional settings. Besides, I had a college drinking party in Derrick's story, so I'm not one to judge.
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Post by SuperKamiGuy1 on Jul 7, 2021 21:20:11 GMT
Ironically enough? I just watched an Evil Batman Movie on Netflix. So this is some perfect timing.
Still an intimidating opening and I'm really looking forward to where you go with it! Between the fallen hero and Lady D, Noa's got his work cut out for him! Out of curiosity, is it The Killing Joke?
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Post by Valhalla Erikson on Jul 8, 2021 7:34:37 GMT
Note: The series has a new intro cover! The old one really didn't fit what I have in mind for Noa, plus the armor is Lady D's, so I decided to retool it a little. I like it as it is a nice throwback to the Blade Runner poster
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Post by Valhalla Erikson on Jul 12, 2021 23:42:15 GMT
Issue #1Paragon For HireNote: The words in italics is Noa doing a internal P.I. style monologue
My name is Noa Novak and I’m a Superhero. Superhero for Hire to be exact.
Sitting atop the ledge of an apartment building, the SFH swings his feet back and forth watching the stream of cars rattle past. It’s a warm night- Warmer than usual and it seems that most criminals are taking the night off.
The difference between this and the comics is that, in the comics, superhero activity usually happens the moment you’re out on patrol. In reality there are days when there is no activity whatsoever. Then there are the times when it’ll take hours before any real action occurs. From personal experience that can get pretty boring.
Noa reads the light novel Guardian: Holding Out For a Hero while his ear peace while watching out for any criminal activity on the bottom half of the holographic tablet that he activated in the palm of his black gloved hand. His aunt Nina had someone activate the security cameras around the city and transferred the feed to Noa’s tablet. Between this and reading the light novel Noa has been doing some pretty heavy multitasking.
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Post by SuperKamiGuy1 on Jul 13, 2021 0:01:03 GMT
Issue #1Paragon For HireNote: The words in italics is Noa doing a internal P.I. style monologue
My name is Noa Novak and I'm a Superhero. Superhero for Hire to be exact.
Sitting atop the ledge of an apartment building, the SFH swings his feet back and forth watching the stream of cars rattle past. It's a warm night- Warmer than usual and it seems that most criminals are taking the night off.
The difference between this and the comics is that, in the comics, superhero activity usually happens the moment you're out on patrol. In reality there are days when there is no activity whatsoever. Then there are the times when it'll take hours before any real action occurs. From personal experience that can get pretty boring.
Noa reads the light novel Guardian: Holding Out For a Hero while his ear peace while watching out for any criminal activity on the bottom half of the holographic tablet that he activated in the palm of his black gloved hand. His aunt Nina had someone activate the security cameras around the city and transferred the feed to Noa's tablet. Between this and reading the light novel Noa has been doing some pretty heavy multitasking.
Heh, kind of reminds me of Kick-Ass's early days before everything went insane for the kid. Yeah, not every city is Gotham. Sometimes there's going to be nights when nothing much happens and you just kind of have to keep yourself busy. Sometimes you might get lucky and get to race a speedster but that's rather rare. Nice update and it's nice to see some more of Noa just being in his element and having a night on the town. I especially love the Guardian shout-out! Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
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Post by Valhalla Erikson on Jul 13, 2021 0:58:14 GMT
Note: Interestingly enough that is what inspired me to do the opening. That and cherry-picking some elements of classic Spider-Man into this.
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Post by SuperKamiGuy1 on Jul 13, 2021 1:02:36 GMT
Note: Interestingly enough that is what inspired me to do the opening. That and cherry-picking some elements of classic Spider-Man into this. Excellent sources of inspiration!
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